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my school my school is the hope project school. I love my school.There are three reasons about my shcool. First of all, my school have lot of trees and flowers that looks so beatiful. Secendly,my school teacher attend to nice well. when we made study or life troudle, they were always hope us to solve,in same way they were teached us how to do like those questions.Tirdly,I have lot of firends. we are learning together. I think the most things of my life during these time.