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小学三年级英语作文:My school

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:55浏览次数:6007
要求:
用英语描述下自己的学校,字数在100字以内。
用户的作文(系统评分32.5分
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句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;全文结构较为严谨;作者能较熟练地使用多样的词汇表达,但请注意单词拼写的检查。

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my school my school is the hope project school. I love my school.There are three reasons about my shcool. First of all, my school have lot of trees and flowers that looks so beatiful. Secendly,my school teacher attend to nice well. when we made study or life troudle, they were always hope us to solve,in same way they were teached us how to do like those questions.Tirdly,I have lot of firends. we are learning together. I think the most things of my life during these time.

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