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As students, all of our allowances which is actually not too much come from our parents or other family members.It is impossible for us to save enough money to doing the things we want to even we don't want ask extra money. So the methods how to spend our limited money to do the most things is more important.Here are some advices may help you.When go out for dinner with our friends we can order the restrant on the internet for there are always some discounts or coupons;you can also toghter with others if you really want buy somethings,because for some goods, the more buyers, the lower price they are.When go out, maybe bike or bus is a better choice,not only good for environment but also a cheaper tool.Expect all of above,you can also look for a past-time job to earn money. The more money you save, the more choice you can choose to do what you want.Mostly,you feel happier because you think you spend the money earn by your struggle.
