2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；从句使用量不足；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

Welcome to China，I am very glad that you come to my hometown ,you know ,China is a beautiful country around world. Today ,I will take you to visit my hometown. My home is located in yanan,shaanxi province . It's a red troop place that springs up many heroes.For instance,cave dwelling is a simple for yanan,winter is warmer and summer is cool. All the persons likes it.Second,yanan also has much delicious food ,cold noodles are one of my favourite food,besides，one flipping surface,a kind of noodles,oil steamed bun,yam wipe,and so on.I think you will love it if you visite to yanan. Yanan,a city is brood me ,and I also loved it forever.