2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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Dear lucy I heard from that you will come to visit my hometown.I am very glad to be your guid . In the after days ,I will show you the most beautiful sences in my hometown which you must like them . Firstly ,I will take you to qingtianhe which has