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There are many meaningful affairs we should do in our life. But the coins have two sides, we can't control ourselves to do the things we assert it is meaningful so we should achieve it. We should try our best to enjoy our lifes to spend time for something that will outlast it. As for me, don't waste time is an significant thing. When we grown up, we will figure out the importance of time and we will consider that we can't waste the time to do the meaningless business. Life is short for us and we can't figure out what time we will leave the world. Everything can't be predict, so everyone should enjoy their lifes. What's more, we should cultivate our hobbies. As the goes saying, interest is the best teacher in our lifes, so we should do something for oueselves which it will lead us to earning a qualified life. For example, studying hard ,reading books and travelling the world are the enjoyable things for myself, so I wiil spend my time for learning ,reading and travelling that will outlast it. In conclusion, everyone has their standard in their mind. Undoubtedly,leading a meaningful life is vital and different for everyone. And at this time what we should do is to settle down our mind and try our best to do more unforgettable and meaningful thing to make our life outlast.
