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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
There are many meaningful things that we should do in our life. But the coins have two sides, we can't control ourselves to do the things we assert it is meaningful so we should achieve it. We should try our best enjoy our life for spend time in doing something that will outlast it. In my opinion, it is a significant thing to save time. When we grown up, we will figure out the importance of time and we will consider that we can't waste the time to do the meaningless things. Life is short for us and we can't figure out what time we will leave the world. Everything can't be predicted, so everyone should enjoy their life. What's more, we should cultivate our hobbies. As the goes saying, interest is the best teacher in our life, so we should do something for ourselves which it will lead us a qualified life. For example, studying hard ,reading books and travelling the world are the enjoyable things for myself, so I will spend my time for learning, reading and travelling that will outlast it. To summarize, everyone has their standard in their mind which about achieving ideals for leading a meaningful life. Undoubtedly, leading a meaningful life is vital and different for everyone. And at this time what we should do is to settle down our mind and try our best to do more unforgettable and meaningful thing to make our life outlast.
