题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
With the development of economy and science,more and more people use the computer in common so that it become most important in our life.Today we can't imagine that if one day we left the computer which how boring of our life will be?That's to say,it's necessary for everyone,the computer and our life are closely linked. Have to admit that computer played a most important role in our life.Maybe,it is a teacher that is why it can teach our something when we can't know from the real life.I believe that when we have an opportunity to ask somebody help and the balance is through the computer to help us,more than half would choose the last one.On the one hand,it is convenient for us,because of computer,our life is more simple and shortcut.On the other hand,the computer like a close friend,Writing,reading,searching,what we want to do,computer can help us. However,Most of it is advantage for us,meanwhile it is bad for us,that is reason for computer make people idle,people used to it and depend on it.So,when we use it and we should realize that.Computer is our partner,therefore it cannot become ourselves in any day.