托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

We may always have such experience in our life: when we take part in the sports meeting, all our classmates are cheering for us at the bleacher, the information they tell us is that don't give up and persevere. When we stay up late to prepare for an important examination, we are telling ourselves that we should make our great effort. When we lose our job or have difficulty in our working, we always keep calm and carry on. All these situations demonstrate that people are always persisting. Only after we persevere in going through all the tough things, we become stronger. Perseverance brings experience with us. We keep going on no matter we succeed or fail, only in this way we testify everything so that we can do better the next time. When scientists do experiments, we can't figure out how many times they tried, maybe thousands times, but they insist in doing them again and again. We know why we fail so that we can accumulate all the experience. Perseverance is also a spirit. If we are used to persist, we can have a good habit.