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有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；能较准确地使用高级词汇，词汇运用灵活。
Nowadays, with to development of science and technology, our country has reached information time which with the development of economy we are in the information explosion era. But the excessive information will bring the negative impact rather than the positive influence. From my own perspective, the excessive information will damage our attention on the extent. As an old saying goes, "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention," which it is illustrated that the information explosion bring the negative influence. What's more,under the development of Internet and information, more and more people like getting outer information from the computer rather than having communication with their families and friends, which damage the relationship of the persons and their physical bodies. Last but not least, the information explosion may give rise to the leakness of individuals, which it is possible to make you be cheated on the Internet. To summarize, the impact of the information explosion will bring the negative influence which may damage youself. We should protecting ourselves from Internet cheating and the information explosion. At the same time, we should pay more attention to studying hard and communicating with our friends and parents.
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