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文章用词灵活多样，高级词汇使用也比较准确；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用。
Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, our country has reached information time which with the development of economy we are in the information explosion era. But the excessive information will bring the negative impact rather than the positive influence. From my own perspective, the excessive information will cause our attention can't be focused on the extent. As an old saying goes, "a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention," which it is illustrated that the information explosion will bring the negative influence. What's more, under the development of Internet and information, more and more people like getting outer information from the computer rather than having communication with their families and friends, which damaging the relationship of the persons and their physical bodies. Last but not least, the information explosion may give rise to the leak of individuals, which it is possible to make you be cheated on the Internet. To summarize, the impact of the information explosion will bring the negative influence which may damage yourself. We should protect ourselves from Internet cheating and the information explosion. At the same time, we should pay more attention to studying hard and communicating with our friends and parents.
