正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Hello, everyone! My name is Amy.I have a good friend. She's name is Selina. She is very beautiful and kind.She likes English and Music. She likes singing. She sings well.Our Music teacher likes her very much .Her favourite sport is table tennis.We often play table tennis together.She is my best friend.