复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文中能使用多样的词汇表达,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇;文章层次较为清晰。
Nowadays ,most of the parents want to do every thing for their children ,lead to the children become more an more rely on them ,make them becoming lazy and don't want to do anything .so we can see the young don't know what is independent because they think their parents will help them .That's phenomenon let me deep in mind .And in my eyes ,I think in my lifetime ,my parents like a leader.They can teanch me what things i can do and what things i can't do.But when my have my opinion they always support me ,let me do anything that i want to do . To let the children be independent ,parents should knowlet your children go .Like when they are in trouble ,the first you need to let them faced with .let they do everything for themselves.Gradual they will be independent.