作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Hello,everyone!My name is Amy.I study at Jiangsu Normal University affiliated Experimental school. I am in Class 14 Grade 7. I like all the lessons at our school, but I like English best.My English teacher is Miss Zheng. Miss Zheng is thin and beautiful.She has big eyes.And her nose is small. Miss Zheng very kind of her student.And She often praise her student.So we all like her very much. This is my English teacher----Miss Zheng.