2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句数量偏少；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。

There are many interestingpace in may hometown,and the most I want to take him to see is the great wall. Let me tell you why I take him to there.First the greet wall is famous in the word ,many people go to china in order to see it years.second if you like to know a country you should first found it's curtry, It was built thourond year ago and has been seeing our country's history. That's all I want to say .