2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；部分长句用的不错，但从句比例偏少；请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误，尤其加强高级词汇的使用。

There are many interestingpace in may hometown, and the most I want to take him to see is the great wall. Let me tell you why I take him to there.First the greet wall is famous in the word and many people go to china in order to see it years.second if you like to know a country you should first found it's curtry, It was built thourond year ago and has been seeing our country's history. That's all I want to say . welcome to my homtown.