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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33573[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达丰富灵活,高级词汇使用也较熟练,要注意避免个别拼写错误;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量。

用户练习作文:

how to be a smart consumer after wasteing a plenty of money with collecting kinds of coupons ,i realize that buying goods on sale can not really save money. the most important thing to be a smart consumer is to know what you real needs . in the first term of my collegue time ,i went to the beijing zoo clothes market frequently ,just because the clothes there are 30% cheaper than normal market ,such as xidan ,however ,most clothes buying from the zoo market are low-qualified ,as a result ,i rarely dressed them and threw them away after two or three months.on the contrary ,i bought a coat from xidan with 200 yuan,the coat was so high-qualified that i still put on it last year.this experience make me know that the cheaper always means lower quality. when i was received KFC coupons in the mall ,i usually buy a hamburg or fried chicken,even i have had a dinner.coupons are just a method of KFC to attractive consumers ,people always are so interested in the low price that ignore their real will,this mind result in unnecessary consume. to sum up ,people attractived by low price always waste unnecessary money ,the simple method to avoid this behavior is making sure of your real want.

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