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how to be a smart consumer after wasteing a plenty of money with collecting kinds of coupons ,i realize that buying goods on sale can not really save money. the most important thing to be a smart consumer is to know what you real needs . in the first term of my collegue time ,i went to the beijing zoo clothes market frequently ,just because the clothes there are 30% cheaper than normal market ,such as xidan ,however ,most clothes buying from the zoo market are low-qualified ,as a result ,i rarely dressed them and threw them away after two or three months.on the contrary ,i bought a coat from xidan with 200 yuan,the coat was so high-qualified that i still put on it last year.this experience make me know that the cheaper always means lower quality. when i was received KFC coupons in the mall ,i usually buy a hamburg or fried chicken,even i have had a dinner.coupons are just a method of KFC to attractive consumers ,people always are so interested in the low price that ignore their real will,this mind result in unnecessary consume. to sum up ,people attractived by low price always waste unnecessary money ,the simple method to avoid this behavior is making sure of your real want.