小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用偏少；文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积。

I have six good friends, Today we talk about one of my good friend, him very strong like fat ,We both like taekwondo ,he looked very cute ,we are know because of taekwondo ,he had short black hair ,he from taizhou-zhejiang-China .now we are busy both ,a few not to meet ,I'm miss him ,he is my best friend foever.