小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中从句数量不足；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累。

I have six good friends, Today we talk about one of my good friend, him very strong like fat ,We both like taekwondo ,he looked very cute ,we are know because of taekwondo ,he had short black hair ,he from taizhou-zhejiang-China .now we are busy both ,a few not to meet ,I'm miss to him ,he is my best friend forever.