福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

文中从句数量过少；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；请作者增加词汇表达的灵活性，拼写检查也还需加强。

Nowdays , it is easy for us to use the Internet. We can know and learn a lot from the Internet . It can help us find out somthing useful . However , some students like to play computer games on weekends . It is bad for thrie body and mind . They also feel very tired in class and don't like to have a class .