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It is well know that everyone is eager for success.There are many ways to success,such as hard working,passion or good preparations.The chance of success is eaual to everyone.I think that you want to succeed,there are two fundamental principles should be remembered in you mind:confidence,strong will. The first key factor to success is confidence.Confidence is to success what water is to fish.Whatever you do,you should do it with confidence.If you had no confidence,there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything.What's more,if you do not have confidence,you dare not try to deal with difficulties. A strong will is very essential if we want to achieve our goals. Initially,every success involves several stages of setbacks and risks,and we need to summon up our will to overcome them.Moreover,there are enormons temptations in our path of the pursuit of success.Only with a strong will can we resist the temptation,and persist in chasing our goals until we reach them. People tend to be impatient or too thirsty for easy success in modern society.Actually,whenever we are in haste,we should let Lincoln's words ring by our ear and remember:no pains,no gain,and haste makes waste.
