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有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误。
Currently, with the development of science and technology, more and more people are pursuiting the extent of happiness rather than the money. Furthermore, money can't deal with all the problems but improving the abilities of ourselves will deal with the matters which make us happy. From my own perspective, improving our abilities of dealing with can decrease our difficulties inour life. As a popular saying goes, "happiness is not the absence of problem, but the ability to deal with them." We cannot avoid the problems when the trouble troubles you, as a result we should develop our ability to make ourselves feel happy and fine. If we still alive, trouble will never dissappear in our life because we must earn for life and make friends. That's why we should develop our ability to deal with the trouble according our life which it will bring more the sense of achievementto ourselves during this progress. To summarize, develop our ability not only for settle the problems but also for improving our sense of happiness when we deal with the trouble. At the meanwhile, we should realize a fact that the trouble can't be avoided so we should overcome the difficulties to improve the extent of happiness.
