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Nowadays,The Internet has geart development .Some people think internet can make study and work become more and more efficient ,and others people think The Internet make the teenagers addicted by it and then influence study. In my eyes ,I think every cion has two sides.On the one hand ,The Internet can help us ,like open our horizon ,listen to the music to relax and so on .But on the other hand The Internet is bad for us ,it let us only know how to play the computer games,and don't like study,just know the game.So i think we should use The Internet in a right way,only in this way The Internet can bring more and more benefits to us.