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Dear Mr. Johnson good afternoon! we recieved 3000 pieces product of your company on DEC 22th, but according to our signing of the No. 35 order,the quantity have 3500 pieces, in addition,we still have not the surplus 500 pieces; please check your product list,and we are looking forward your early reply. sorry for the inconvenient! Merry 9/1