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Dear Mr. Johnson We received 3000 pieces product of your company on DEC 22th, But according to our signing of the No. 35 order,the quantity have 3500 pieces, In addition, we still have no the surplus 500 pieces; Please check your delivery order,and we are looking forward reply of your as soon as possible. Thank you.