注意:
1. 开头和结尾已为你写好(不记入总词数 ); 2. 词数100左右。
作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章词汇表达不够丰富,也请检查文章的单词拼写;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
I am very glad to tell you some thing about my hometown.It is not big but very prosperous.And we can see beautiful sceneries and have fun together.We can go to the island and play together.We can swim,climb the moutain,eat some sea food...I promise we will have fun here. If you are travellng by plane,you can take the No.45 bus and get off at the last station when you get off the plain.If you will by train,I will pick you up at the train station.