2006年6月英语四级作文真题:招募志愿者

衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

Today,our school will hold an activity that an announcement for a voluntary program. The program is due to help student realise a lot of people need to help. And this main work are plant trees, provide your own blood to hospital,help some homeless people and so on. we will arange everyone's order. If you want to be an volunteer,you can jion of us.you should put your name,class,telephone number to us.after that ,we would told your our arange quickly.