2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

I live in a beautiful city.There have many delicious food,highly building and lovely people.I love my country,because this is a memory,i love them,all my family and friend.I love the dumpling of myself,noddle of my father,bouili of my mather and braciole of my sister.In my traveling,i love the mountains,because i liike the feel at the top.I can speak highly with the air and shout to the countryside down of the mountain.I have a dream,i want to share our country to every Tourist.And teach them the technologic to cook,and cooking for us.Hahaha.