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It's always a question for us that when we participate in sport meeting, our purpose is to win a prize, isn't it? However, does it mean that the sports are meaningful only when we win? Obviously, the answer is "no". In Olympic games, the famous athletes always have their old rivals and they may have competed for many years. Their ability is well-matched. They both take every competition seriously, maybe they lose, but they don't think losing prize is really a failure. They respect their rivals and have the precious friendship. The Olympic is founded initially for peace. We all know that winning something is not the most important. The picture that two athletes hug together and send blessing to each other is so engaging. I believe they were't thinking getting a prize at that time and it's just a purely benediction. It's not a shame when you didn't win in a match. The sport itself is priceless, a prize is only an encouragement. You attend the sport and try your best which is really something can embody the sport. We all know that failure is the mother of success. Only when you fail this time then you can do better the next time. Failed Experiences not only creating dejection, but also teach you a valuable lesson. Sometimes we should enjoy the process, the result just has two possibilities, but the process is so colorful and shinning. It is happy to sweat and struggle in the field if you like sports by heart. You tried your best and just told yourself "I made it." That's enough.