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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
可增加从句的使用量，注意个别的句子错误；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中词汇表达用的较灵活，同时能够较恰当地使用高级词汇。
Today,internet is famous of world,everybody can't leave computer,people can use computer to play game ,work,lisen to the music,therefore,internet is necessary with our I think internet use face to face with parent and girl friend is most inportant,it can help me promote friendship,because it can help meet that a few time. But i think internet don't replace meet,internet is a new trend in world
