小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；文章词汇表达不够丰富，也请检查文章的单词拼写；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。

Hello susan, I am evan' mum, thank you for your help for Evan'writeing. Evan says he is very like writing class. I hope Evan'writing growing fast. could you give some homework to Evan. forexample 6 writing for one week. you can give him six titla, one day at new school, my new teacher, my dog eat.