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Hello susan, I am evan' mum, thank you for your help for Evan'writeing. Evan says that he like writing class very much. I hope Evan'writing growing fast. could you give some homework to Evan. forexample 6 writing for one week. you can give him six titla, one day at new school, my new teacher, my dog eat.