小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；语言不流畅。

Hello susan, I am Evans' mum. thank you for your help of Evans writing. Evan says that he like writing class very much. I hope Evan'writing growing fast. could you give some homework to Evan. forexample 6 writing for one week. you can give him six titla, one day at new school, my new teacher, my dog eat.