小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积；语言不流畅。

Hello susan, I am Evans' mum. Thank you for your help of Evans writing. Evan says that he like writing class very much. I hope Evan'writing growing fast. Could you give some homework to Evan. For examples you can give him 6 writing of different title for one week. you can give him six titla, one day at new school, my new teacher, my dog eat.