小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词。

Hello susan, I am Evans' mum. Thank you for your help of Evans writing. Evan says that he like writing class very much. I hope Evan'writing growing fast. Could you give some homework to Evan. For examples you can give him 6 writing of different titles for one week. Like this ：one day at new school, my new teacher, my dog －－－。