2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。

I think the most interesting place is the river of JieXi. There have many smaller river to swimming such as us to laughing. That day besides me is 24 students to this interesting place. We take a big bus leave our hometown to this. We take picture,learn swimming,talk jokes etc.