2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My friend,Jack,welcomes to my hometown.There is many interestingplaces,whice I think I'm likely to stay in all my lifetime. Specially, the Dinghu mountain ,a smost interestingplace ,I like it very much and we will visit it with pleaure. There is a lot of trees covering wherever so that the oxyzen is so good. Not only trees, but also water is valute, which is quite green and cool .