题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;采用了一些简单的从句;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
It is universally acknowledged that trust is essential of public interaction.With out trust,there is nothing should be leave behind in our interpersonal relationships.On the contrary,for the individual,we are able to build up a more intimate friendship with others as absolute trust we have.However,it easily destroy your trust more than you build up.,therefore, you should treasure it carefully.