文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活,但在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;简单句偏多了;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
hello, long time no see. i wanna introduce english learning ways.hope it will help you in some way. first,you should try your best to practice with chinese peolple. dont be shy.you will make a great improvement i think. secondly, i hope you can keep writing as often as possilble. finally, i hope one day ,we will be together to talk our