高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达不够丰富，但部分高级词汇用的比较灵活。

My hometown is perfect because the air is very clear. My hometown has built many moods because we sale that. The river is clear too and there are many fishes happily to swim.Not only the building is economic street is crowed,but also the human is hard living. Happily,the high building is all over my hometown and the cars cross road.Sadily, the environment of dustry is very late, the mood is decreasing,the fish is disappear.So, the solve of the demage og the pollution is very urgency.