高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者词汇多样性不足，但能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇，但单词拼写的检查要加强。

My hometown is perfect because the air is very clear. My hometown has built many moods because we sale that. The river is clear too and there are many fishes happily to swim.Not only the building is economic street is crowed,but also the human is hard living. Happily,the high building is all over my hometown and the cars cross road.Sadily, the environment of dustry is very late, the mood is decreass,the fish is disappear.So, the solve of the demage og the pollution is very urgency.