2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。

Yesterday i had a dream of Alice.she is a wonderful girl. she took me to the wonderland ,there are kinds of flowers.they could talk. many animals flew in the sky.i tried my best to fly,but failed. then alice gave me special silk coat. i also could fly as high as them when i wore it. suddenly,i fell down and shouted "help" finally,i woke up and found it was a dream.