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I am an English assistment and fond more and more classmates lose their heart to learn English recently.There is what I think is important to learn English .Next are some merstures to improve our English If you have an good English basis which you can depend on to speak with foreigners You can go abroad to expend your eyes .Not only because of it but you can improve your English score . whate's more you can learn English culture There are some measures .First of all, building up many new words is the basis to read articles .So focus on he new words . Next listen to some English mueic . Not only can it improve your English but also make you feel relax .The last but not the least, do more exercise every day. As a senior heigh school student like you .I understand why you cann't learn Engliah well .I believe if you do as my suggestions you will recieve a surprise.