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湖南怀化市2012-2013年高二上学期期末试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:13浏览次数:2761
要求:
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是一名英语课代表,发现部分同学对英语学习失去了信心。请你写一篇词数不少于100字的英语短文来鼓励他们,唤起其对学习英语的兴趣。
写作要点:
1、学习英语的重要性。
2、提高英语成绩的措施(至少3点)。
用户的作文(系统评分61.5分
评语:

文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇;可适当增加从句的使用,注意几处句子错误。

用户练习作文:

I am an English assistment and fond more and more classmates lose their heart to learn English recently.There is what I think is important to learn English .Next are some merstures to improve our English If you have an good English basis which you can depend on to speak with foreigners You can go abroad to expend your eyes .Not only because of it but you can improve your English score . whate's more you can learn English culture There are some measures .First of all, building up many new words is the basis to read articles .So focus on he new words . Next listen to some English mueic . Not only can it improve your English but also make you feel relax .The last but not the least, do more exercise every day. As a senior heigh school student like you .I understand why you cann't learn Engliah well .I believe if you do as my suggestions you will recieve a surprise.

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