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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;作者能较灵活地使用高级词汇,但要注意减少拼写错误;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

At the first sight of this picture, We can see four people attracted by smartphone holding in their hands respectively, are so devoted to the content of the stupid mobile with the delicious vegetable and meat food surrounding them. Ridiculously, below thecaption is a topic saying," the time of smartphone of party ". Whatmight account for this strange phenomenon ? In effect, the far-reaching and meaning implication behind this picture is thatyoungsters living in modern society are not just confessed with theInternet world but also forgetting to enjoy the happiness ofcommunicating with old acquaintances. For instance, we are alwaysscanning the e-book in our hard mobile phone when taking subway,eating breakfast, even driving on the road ! But little time is willing to spend exchange ideas of / about other people that accompany with us. Obviously, this behavior is not appropriated by the majority of public. therefore, what can we do to reverse this prevailing phenomenon ?From the perspective of me as a young woman, two suggestions areputting forward . For the one thing, regulating the time of usingsmartphone is necessary for us to avoid to embarrass moment happens, such as a party. on the other hand , enhancing therealization of the significance and valuable face-to-face friend is themost urgent thing we must do. Only we take steps to change, can we have a more rosy life.

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