高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

从句过少，错误句子偏多；高级词汇的积累方面还有很大的空间，同时文中拼写有点多；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

Ten years ago,a lot of green trees aroundly my home town.Fish palying in the reiver with their parner.Neiberhood and my house all are not new,peoples life are diffcultly.Now,strenght a lotof budings and shops,large cars and small cars across that beautiful stress.Tenologe of devolement made enviloment morn than bad,trees and fishs decreinse.Cure polution is nevours.