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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
评语:

作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

At the first sight of this picture, we can see four people attracted by smartphone holding in their hands respectively, are so devoted to the content of the stupid mobile with the delicious vegetable and meat food surrounding them. Ridiculously, below the caption is a topic saying," the time of smartphone of party ". What might account for this strange phenomenon ? In effect, the far-reaching and meaning implication behind this picture is that youngsters living in modern society are not just immerse with the Internet world but also forgetting to enjoy the happiness of communicating with old acquaintances. For instance, we are always scanning the e-book in our hard mobile phone when taking subway,eating breakfast, even driving on the road ! But little time is willing to spend exchange ideas about other people that accompany us. Obviously, this behavior is not appropriated by the majority of public. therefore, what can we do to reverse this prevailing phenomenon ?From the perspective of me as a young woman, two suggestions are putting forward . For the one thing, regulating the time of using smartphone is necessary for us to avoid embarrassing moment happens, such as a party. on the other hand , enhancing the realization of the significance and valuable face-to-face friend is the most urgent thing we must do. Only we take steps to change, can we have a more rosy life.

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