高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

简单的使用了一些复杂句，但从句使用不充分；拼写错误偏多了；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

Ten years ago,a lot of green trees around my home town.Fish playing in the reiver with their friends.Neiberhood and my house all are not new,peoples life were diffcultly.Now,strenght a lotof budings and shops,large cars and small cars across that beautiful stress andTenologe of devolement made enviloment morn than bad,trees and fishs decreinse.Cure pollution is nevours.