高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中从句的使用的有点少了；能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，还请仔细检查词汇的拼写；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

Ten years ago,a lot of green trees around my home town.Fish playing in the reiver with their friends.Neiberhood and my house all were not new,people life were diffcultly.Now,strenght a lotof budings and shops,large cars and small cars across that beautiful stress andTenologe of devolement made enviloment morn than bad,trees and fishs of all dies.Cure pollution is the priority.