高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中从句的使用的有点少了；作者词汇量积累较好，但高级词汇的积累仍需加强，还要避免有拼写错误；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

Ten years ago,a lot of green trees around my home town.Fish playing in the reiver with their friends.Neiberhood and my house all were not new,people life were difficulty.Now,strenght a lotof budings and shops,large cars and small cars across that beautiful stress andTenologe of devolement made enviloment morn than bad,trees and fish of all dies.Cure pollution is the priority.