高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中从句的使用的有点少了；文章使用了较丰富的词汇表达，高级词汇的使用也较灵活多样；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

Ten years ago,a lot of green trees around my home town.Fish playing in the reiver with their friends.Neiberhood and my house all were not new,people life were difficulty.Now,build a lot of buildings and shops,large cars and small cars across that beautiful stress andTenologe of devolement made environment morn than terrible,trees and fish of all dies.Cure pollution is the priority.