高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者词汇表达较丰富多样，高级词汇使用较熟练；文中从句的使用的有点少了；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

In the pass,a lot of green trees were around my home town.Fish playing in the reiver with their friends.Neiberhood and my house all is not new,people life were difficulty.Now,build a lot of buildings and shops,large cars and small cars across at beautiful stress and science technologe of development made environment morn than terrible,trees and fish of all dies.Cure pollution is the priority.